I have a rough draft of my paper, and it needs a lot of work done to it. I have a lot of comments on what to fix from my professor. I also currently have 12 sources, but I need to add 2 more into my paper. I will include my paper, a document with all of my sources, including the 2 extra that need to be added, that will also contain my paper topic. The two sources I add will not be in chicago bibliography form, so please make sure to make them that way. I will also include documents including her comments which are in a red square in the image, as well as a second copy of my essay that has additional comments throughout the paper. This paper is my grade, and I am swamped with my other classes, so getting this fixed into something way better will help me incredibably.